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ShadowMaru ([personal profile] swissarmyninja) wrote in [personal profile] kismet_loop_mods 2015-12-18 04:45 am (UTC)

Re: REVISIONS

First person writing sample revision

[The ninja mech gives a dirty look at the patrol-mech]

You aren't serious. Tell me you're not serious.

[he could feel his optic twitching at the mech on the comm screen.]

I am not doing that, I may have lost some dignity but I'm not going to resort to that I don't care you don't want to do it, I'm not playing escort.

[Shadowmarus head bows in frustration]

Why do I have to be the only rational one on the team? No, Gunmax-don't answer that. You're very well aware why I'm asking that you baka. Tell Deckerd he owes me for this.

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